For one of my environmental portraits I really want to capture my Dad in his shed.
Every blokey bloke has his shed, but to me there is no other like my Dads. You name it, he's got it in his shed! I grew up building cars, fixing lawn mowers & chilling out on cold winter nights in front of the heater with my Dad in his shed. Yes, I should have been a boy! Though a bond between father & daughter couldn't be stronger when built like this.
Over the past few years my Dad has been going down hill quite quickly with an illness that will eventually leave him in nursing care. My Dad is my idol & I wanted to make this portrait more than just a portfolio piece. After loosing my brother in 1996 Dad has always gone to his shed & sat on his chair to remember & prey, in his own world of thought. Birthdays are the main focus of those times, a good example of when he spends quite time tucked away in this spot.
Today March 10.03.2010, his 58th birthday I shot him in this environment, as he sat doing just those things. My Dad shows blank emotion, but I feel i can read him like a book. I've always analysed everything he does, ever since my brother passed away, watching Dad is where MY emotion weakens. Knowing that my Dad seems the strongest person I know (along with my Mum) but underneath he's so destroyed by loss & hard times in his life. My Dad & my brother were close, we all share very similar unique values.
For the image itself I'm not sure. For a blind viewer I feel it lacks the emotion Im trying to capture. Im pretty sure Im going to need to reshoot possibly using flash to compliment the characteristics of the environment and my dad as the subject. Technically & possibly composition wise I'm looking for guidance. So Im totally open to suggestion!

I also photographed Dad posed playing the old school poker-machine I used to play while hanging out with him when I was younger. Framed by jokey straps and engine hoist chains, the background, his amazing collection of neatly placed & displayed tools I used to pass to him as a kid, back lit by outside light. I think I can defiantly improve on this image with simple things like using a reflector to make my dad, 'pop' more as the subject.

Comments and critique, as always is greatly appreciated!